Feedback from the pitch

 Feedback from the class

This week, as a class we all listened to each other's initial ideas for our films. Unfortunately, Olivia was not here for this as she was off, therefore I gathered feedback then we called and discussed this after school. I presented the two Padlets with our ideas and what we wanted the film to be about, as well as our inspiration from other thrillers. Although we didn't yet have a clear idea what exactly our film would be about, or what would happen in it, we were taking ideas and themes from other films to develop our ideas.

The initial feedback the class gave:

- Idea of 'obsession'.

- Symbolism (think of the moth from Silence of The Lambs - how could you present that kind of imagery through your film?)

- Look at shows like 'You' which focus on male power and violence.

- Stalking and killing?

- Your idea needs more substance and depth so you will need to come up with a story before deciding how to present it through film.

- Need to come up with a final idea.

What we will do next, based on this feedback and how we will improve

I think that the plan after this pitch is to decide exactly what our film will be about, what will happen and where the threat/reveal will come from. Since me and Olivia were apart this week, it has been difficult for us to finalise some kind of idea together, especially as we both have different ideas. Therefore, we will be meeting once she is back in school to come up with a final idea and then build off of that to start creating our film.